The Conspiracy
The story of Todd Matthews, who on one fateful day saves the lives of an entire bankfull of people...
As news of this event spreads, people become interested in Todd, people who want to use his talents in a goverment plot... a plot as old as the videogame itself...
Think 'Metal Gear Solid' meets 'Bourne Identity/Supremecy/Ultimatum' meets 'A History of Violence' with a bit of a Timmi Twist... and fur...
Updates 12:00 Central African Time Wednesday and Saturday... without fail... if it's not updating, the Goverment has caught up with me and I'm dead...
Chapter 4
timmiboi 01 Dec 2007 04:53 am
Well... the story has got pretty far... It's also turning out longer than originally intended. Mainly cause I want YOU, the reader, to connect with the characters!Lycan has had a slight appearance change... though its very subtle. Black behind his eyes and a larger white area over his snout, with a black streak and tip on his tail... looks way better methinks...
also tried a new character design overall... the characters are now drawn such that they are 7 heads tall rather than 6... makes them a bit scrawnier (like their creator!) and less "bobble-headed"... but they definitly are better proportioned, i really put effort into anatomy in this chapter!
Otherwise im very happy with how the characters and style have progressed... much more consistant... i'm gonna say it again... the art really has improved again this chapter!
as for backgrounds... they're alot more defined and look miles better than previous attempts!
ooh! ooh! proper speech bubbles!!! looks way better and is actually EASIER to place words!
and PLEASE! all my regular readers! Please gimme your thoughts on THIS! MY FINAL COLOUR/PENCIL FORUM POST! Only Stuff-the-comic has given response thus far... but i would also appreciate some CRITIQUE! thanks!
enjoy!